Wednesday 21 March 2018

Descriptive writing of a Process

I've been working on descriptive Writing. I've tried to give a picture in the mind of the reader with the language I've used.
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  1. PRS Blogs21 March 2018 at 20:59

    Hi Troy, this is looking really good now! You sure persevered with this one didn't you! But it paid off and I think you will have learnt a lot more than some others who gave up. You were able to solve your problem yourself which is a good skill to have. Miss J

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  2. Mikihiro4 May 2018 at 11:40

    Hi Troy, I'm Miki from Panmure Bridge School. This is amazing DLO. I like how you draw the parrot it looks like real. Keep it up!

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    1. Anonymous11 June 2018 at 09:54

      Hi Miki thanks for the comment have you ever considered drawing something on google draw.

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  3. Tai4 May 2018 at 11:46

    Hey Troy! My name is Tai from Panmure Bridge school up in Auckland. Your parrot looks amazing. I have a question how long did it take for you to create your parrot and what kind of tools did you use. Nice work and keep it up!

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    1. Anonymous7 June 2018 at 10:45

      Hi Tai thanks for the comment. I used polyline and line. ruffley 45 minutes when i figured out how to use the program right

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  4. Mataio22 May 2018 at 10:23

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  5. Mataio22 May 2018 at 10:25

    Kia Ora Troy I am Mataio from Panmure Bridge School. Your parrot looks amazing. I really like how you explained what you did, and how you added an interesting fact which was There are 372 different species of Parrots. The one thing I think you could of added is a colour to your background.
    Was it very hard making your Parrot?

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    1. Anonymous7 June 2018 at 09:53

      Hi Mataio thanks for the comment. It was hard until i figured out how to use the program properly. Thanks for the tips to.

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  6. joel1 June 2018 at 13:43

    Talofa Troy I am Joel,I have been blog commenting on your other posts.I really am fascinated by the way you have drawn a parrot from scratch you have copied from the design and drawed a parrot that looks just like the picture in your DLO. This is amazing Troy keep it up!!!.

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Thanks for your thoughtful, positive comment.

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